2018年12月六级作文真题解析与范文

　一、六级写作题目预览

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short  essay on how to balance ① work and leisure /② job responsibilities and personal  interests / ③ academic study and extracurricular activities. You should write at  least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

　　第一套题是“如何平衡工作和生活娱乐时光”，这就是我们预测班讲到的“劳逸结合”那道题。第二道题，是“如何平衡个工作责任和个人利益”，还是“如何平衡工作责任和个人兴趣爱好”呢?牛津辞典对interests的解释是，“业余爱好”，也就是你的爱好、兴趣所在。我们的预测范文“以兴趣为导向还是以市场为导向”命中了一半。第三道题，“如何平衡学业和课外活动”。稍微给这次六级进行一个总评，你会发现，现在六级题目出的非常好，只不过上面的题目单词有一些难，但这些难绝对没有超纲。难度较6月份，甚至17年、16年都没有特别大的起伏。话题更加接地气，它比6月份如何建立雇主雇员的关系，如何建立消费者和商家信任，可能稍微有一点点难。它让你平衡工作、学业、课外活动、工作责任。六级题更加偏重于大三、大四学生即将面对工作和学业选择的学生。

　　写作基本思路是：

　　l 开头段：引出话题，现象或者阐明平衡的重要性

　　l 中间段：

　　平衡工作和娱乐：安排时间，提高效率，防止过劳死

　　平衡工作责任和业余兴趣

　　平衡学业和课外活动：学业为主，合理安排时间，劳逸结合

　　l 结尾段：观点的归纳总结，重申重要性

　　这三套题任意一套题都可以用这个思路写，开头段引出话题，如何平衡，为什么要平衡;或者开篇阐明平衡A和B——课外活动和学业、工作责任和个人兴趣爱好、工作和业余活动之间平衡的重要性。第二段，“平衡工作和娱乐”，或者说“平衡工作责任和业余兴趣爱好”，是可以共用的。你都可以合理安排时间，还可以提高你的工作效率，这样你就有时间娱乐或者培养你的兴趣爱好。把身心健康摆在第一位，业余兴趣爱好，劳逸结合。它们可以共用一套逻辑。第三套题，平衡学习和课外活动，我们还是要兼顾二者，学业为重，没有在学校里面学到的知识和技能，今后出去创业、就业，都会有困难。第三段，把你观点归纳总结，重申一下平衡他们的重要性。

　　二、写作分值评估标准

　　写作满分 = 奖励分 + 基本分

　　奖励分：字迹、卷面、闪光点

　　基本分：语言、结构、内容

　　写作分数档次：0分，2分，5分，7分，11分，14分

　　关于写作框架：

　　一、引出话题(+图画/ 表描述 or 谚语引出 or 个人观点)

　　二、阐释话题(原因后果、对立观点、举例论证)

　　三、个人评论 +建议措施 + 憧憬未来

　　这次考试没有图画图表描述，直接引出观点即可。第二段，重点是原因后果、对立观点、举例论证，这次题目可以用对立观点、举例论证。第三段个人归纳总结，可以给出一些建议措施，告诉别人，如何劳逸结合、如何平衡工作和生活，最后憧憬回来。

　　关于结构：需要使用表示结构的关联词，这样能够让你的文章逻辑清晰。如，Firstly, Secondly, Finally, To begin  with, In addition, Last but not least, For one thing, For another。

　　关于内容：

　　主题段落论证——

　　①议论文：各方观点

　　②说明文：原因后果

　　③记叙文：举例论证

　　关于语言，准确是第一要务，拼写不能错。语言句型多样化，我们要学会一些高端的或者复杂的句型，比如说倒装句，我们憧憬未来的时候就可以用到。还有一些从句，还有谚语警句。比如，People  often say, “All work and no playing makes Jack a dull boy.” Ironically, it is  easier said than done. 或者，“It is hard to balance … and … ” is an old cliché, but  I totally agree with it. 这两句话都可以给大家文章里面增加亮点。　

2018年12月六级真题作文范文

一、平衡学习和课外活动网络

How to balance academic study and extra curricular activities

Recently, the topic of the balance between academic studies and  extra-curricular activities has been brought to public attention. We can find  many examples easily: students’ study load makes them out of breath and leaves them no time for leisure.

If this situation continues to worsen, young people’s physical and mental status raises the alarm. Thus, it’s urgent to strike a good balance between study and rest/personal hobbies. For one thing, too much academic work gives rise to immunity deterioration, which causes many health problems. For another,  free time/constructive pastime helps us live in a positive cycle.

Therefore, what we should do is to find enough time to develop our hobbies by finishing the homework on time and attending some beneficial activities off school. For example, regular exercise is a recommendable extracurricular activity to get relaxed.

By doing exercises your body can produce a hormone that makes you recover from exhaustion. What’s more, you can transfer your focus from busy study by attending a reading seminar , thereby getting your intense nerves calm  down.”

二、平衡工作责任和个人网络

How to balance work and leisure

Recently, the topic of the balance between work and leisure/hobby has been  brought to public attention. We can find many examples easily: modern people’s  workload makes people out of breath and leaves them no time for leisure/their  interest.

If this situation continues to worsen, their physical and mental status  raises the alarm. Thus, it’s urgent to strike a good balance between working  duties and rest/personal hobbies. For one thing, too much work gives rise to  immunity deterioration, which causes many health problems. For another, free  time/constructive pastime helps us live in a positive cycle.

Therefore, what we should do is to find enough time to rest/develop our hobbies by finishing the task on time and arranging some beneficial activities off work. For example, regular exercise is a recommendable way to get relaxed.  By doing exercises your body can produce a hormone that makes you recover from  exhaustion. What’s more, you can transfer your focus from busy job by reading an  interesting book or listening to a favorite song, thereby getting your intense  nerves calm down.”

三、平衡工作和休闲娱乐

How to balance job responsibilities and personal interests

People often say, “All works and no playing makes Jack a dull boy.” In  other words, excessive works are harmful to us both physically and mentally.  Therefore, how to balance work and leisure is of significance in our daily  life.

There are several measures which can make us achieve a balance between work  and leisure. To begin with, it is advisable to make strategic decisions ahead of  time. One should think of realistic goals to achieve at work or in the spare  time, which can ensure the proper arrangement of one’s time. Secondly, making  efficient use of time is crucial in balancing work and leisure. After devoting  enough energy in completing work assignments, one can get the difficult or  important tasks done early. This helps guarantee oneself certain blocks of time  to have fun.

Life is shorter than what you expected. We should bear in mind that  balancing work and leisure is necessary for our health. Only in this way can we  enjoy our life.

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