2017年北京市中考英语作文及范文

题目：宽容是一种美德．人与人之间难免会有磕磕绊绊．面对矛盾，多一份包容和谅解，生活就会多一缕阳光．

某英文网站正在开展以”包容、谅解”为主题的征文活动．假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈生活中你原谅他人的一次经历，主要内容包括：你们之间发生了什么，你为什么原谅对方，以及原谅对方之后的感受．

提示词语：hurt，realize，forgive（原谅），happy

提示问题：What happened between you and him/her？

Why did you decide to forgive him/her？

How did you feel after forgiving him/her？

范文

Last week I had a fight with my friend Tom．He took away my pen without my agreement．My father bought it for me as a birthday gift．Tom’s behavior hurt me so much that I wouldn’t say a word to him．（高分结构1）Later he made an apology by writing a card ：”Sorry，please forgive me”．He felt ashamed for what he did．At last I realized that I was too stingy, so I chose to forgive him．He was very happy for my forgiveness．And I was very glad to have my friend back．

As the Chinese old saying goes”to err is human”, in our whole long life nobody can make no mistakes．Children may break bowls，students may cheat or do something against the teacher，even grown﹣ups may do something wrong．Keeping something unpleasant in mind does no good to us．（高分结构2）We should learn to forget and forgive, which brings happiness and pleasure back to our life．（高分结构3）

高分结构解析

上清北杨立欣老师（北京大学）：上清北英语教师，北京大学英语语言文学系本科。高中就读于北京市重点学校，英语成绩连续三年年级排名第一。大学期间成绩优秀，取得英语专业八级证书。有多年英语教学经验，尤其擅长教授语法及写作。亲切热情的教学风格、中英双语教学方式，深受同学们喜爱。

1. Tom’s behavior hurt me so much that I wouldn’t say a word to him．汤姆的行为使我很生气，以至于我再也不和他说一句话。

解析：so…that…特别怎样，以至于怎样, so后跟形容词或副词。

例：He run so fast that I couldn’t catch up with him. 他跑的那么快以至于我都跟不上他。

2. Keeping something unpleasant in mind does no good to us．记住那些不愉快的事情对我们没有好处。

解析：

①do good to sb. 对某人有好处，注意与be good for sb. 相区别。

例：This diet will do good to your health. 这种节食对你的健康有好处。

②keeping something unpleasant in mind, 动名词作主语的用法

例：complaining is useless. 抱怨是没用的

3. We should learn to forget and forgive, which brings happiness and pleasure back to our life．我们应该学会忘记和原谅，这会让幸福和快乐重新回到我们的生活中。

解析：定语从句的使用，此处先行词为一句话(we should learn to forget and forgive)，引导词应使用which。

例：The sun heats the earth, which makes it possible for human kind to live on the earth. 太阳给地球提供热量，这使得人类能够在地球上生存。

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