2019考研英语一真题作文解析及范文

51.Directions:

　　Suppose you are working for the “Aiding Rural Primary School” project of your university. Write an email to answer the inquiry from an international student volunteer, specifying the details of the project.

　　You should write neatly on the ANWSER SHEET.

　　Do not sign you own name at the end of the letter, use “Li Ming ” instead.

　　Do not write the address. (10 points)

　　解析：

　　从形式来讲，今年的英语一小作文又考察了书信的形式，还是在意料之中的。从历年来的考查形式来看：无论是英语一还是英语二，小作文考查书信类和告示类两种。其中，从近年的考频来说，书信是考查的重点。在英语一中，小作文考查了15年，其中，13年都考查到了书信。

　　但从内容来说今年的英语一的小作文有点难度。考查了回复询问信，偏近于介绍性的信，需要介绍“援助乡村小学”的志愿者活动的具体内容。英语一之前的小作文从没有考过此类话题。在书信中，建议信和推荐信出现得最多。而无论是回复信还是介绍性的信都只分别在英语二中考过，这也是近几年当中首次出现的一个全新的话题。

　　写作时，按照一般顺序。第一段写非常开心收到你的询问信这样过渡性内容，再加上写作目的;第二段改写题目提纲，具体介绍这个项目的具体内容;第三段再次点题和写期待。本文的要点有三个：一个是作为回复信，一段中过渡性内容应切题，不能生搬硬套模板;再就是是介绍的内容也要切题，符合这类活动的常规安排。第三段可以表示欢迎和期待。

　　另外，注意小作文的评分侧重点。考研大纲指出：A 节作文的评分侧重点在于信息点的覆盖、内容的组织、语言的准确性、格式和语域的恰当。对语法结构和词汇多样性的要求将根据具体试题作调整。允许在作文中使用提示语中出现过的个别关键词或词组，但使用提示语中出现过的句子将被扣分。这一点一定要引起重视!

　　范文：

　　Dear friends,

　　As a coordinator of “Aiding Rural Primary School” project organized by Peking university, I am much delighted to have heard from you asking the possibility of being a volunteer for the project and I am writing to make a brief introduction regarding it.

　　You are expected to spend two months in assisting education for a rural primary school in a financially disadvantaged village in Inner Mongolia, a minority region. To let the kids obtain promotion in both knowledge and practices, I believe the following aspects can be beneficial. Firstly, as native English speakers, you can teach the kids some basic words for reading and communicating in English. Secondly, some colorful after-class activities and psychological guidance are also indispensable for their healthy growth, you efforts on these will also open up new horizons for them. The detailed arrangement will be sent if we have reached an agreement.

　　Please accept my heartfelt gratitude for your unselfish help and enthusiasm for the kids in rural area. If you have any other practical suggestions, please do not hesitate to tell us.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

52: Directions:

　　Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the picture below. In your essay, you should:

　　1) Describe the picture briefly;

　　2) Interpret the implied meaning, and

　　3) Give your comments

　　Write your answer on the ANSWER SHEET.

解析：

　　虽然今年大纲对于英语一作文部分要求词汇进行了改变，但是，今年依然按照传统考查的是图画的作文。B节作文的评分重点在于内容完整性、文章的组织连贯性、语法结构及词汇的多样性与语言的准确性。就我看来，今年英语一大作文考查有难度。首先，图画的描述比较难。从表面上看，本篇作文的题目或题材似乎是大家都十分熟悉的,正如我们2004年考题类似。但实际上对考生提出了更高的要求，即加入了双人对话的部分。。作为即将接受研究生教育的高校学生，必须学会从多样化或较为复杂的角度来考虑和分析、解决问题，因为生活中的许多问题绝非低层次作文中“问题-原因-解决”的“单一链条”关系那样简单。

　　按照要求，本作文需要包括三个组成部分：(1)描述图画;(2)分析图画的用意或内在含义;(3)就此话题表达个人的观点或提出建议。

　　(1)描述图画：描写或描述的一般要求是“准确”和“生动”。这里考虑到文章写作的因素，还要增加一个“合理”方面的考虑。正如图画所描述的那样，一个同学在选课时陷入犹豫之中。他在考虑是选择“知识新、重创新和有难度”的，还是选择“给分高、易通过和作业少”。

　　(2)分析图画的用意或内在含义：图画的描述仅仅是文章的“切入点”，分析才是文章的核心所在。如果说准确、生动、合理是对描述的基本要求的话，那么，系统、深入则是对于分析得基本要求。所谓“系统”首先是要承接上文，以对图画中关于“选择”展开分析。这样才能保证文章从内容到形式的系统性或整体性。其次，分析必须循着“选择”这一线索展开。所谓“深入”，是指分析要透彻，要触及问题的实质。选择很重要，选择之后的坚持和努力更重要。

　　(3)就此话题表达个人的观点或提出建议：发表个人观点时，重要的是要考虑到观点的“中的”和“合理”。观点应切中要害、尽管本篇作文的观点会因人而异，但大体上应该包括这样几点：一是合理选择;二是坚持努力;三是培养学生面临困难和挑战的能力。

　　同以往的命题写作一样，应注意：1)突出中心。避免偏颇。2)结构完整。三个大的组成部分不能缺少，每个组成部分所占的比重要合理。3)避免错误。拼写、语法等方面要小心，尽量避免不应有的错误。4)句式变换。尽量避免用同样的句式写作，否则会给人以单一、乏味的感觉。当然，句式的变换不是为了变换本身，而是为了更好地表达思想，为了读者更好地理解。5)增加“亮点”。写作中应该通过精准的表述、适度的引用等方式制造“亮点”，以加深读者的印象。由于考生的“读者”就是阅卷人，这种“亮点”自然有利于提高作文的成绩。

　　范文：

　　What emerges into our eyes is that there are two young men standing on the stairs of the mountain. The most impressive element is that in the right place crouches a seemingly exhausted adult with a depressed look and a few words,such as “I am tired and I want to give up.”while in the left counterpart stands an energetic adult,who is smiling to his company and passionately encouraging him to continue with the words “Don’t do that and we will reach the end with a simple rest”.

　　In the real life, there is no one who can achieve the remarkable success in whatever he does without persistence. I can come up with no better illustration than the example of Thomas Edison, a distinguished scientist, who contributes his success to endless pursuing news goals. Just as he puts it, “Without continuous insistence of the conduct of experiments, I will not be so fortunate to have such a successful performance.” Apart from the example of Edison, many other great figures in the history also attributed their success to continuous pursuing something more meaningful in their lives.

　　Therefore, as a qualified young people living in modern society, I value persistence as a vital principle in my lives and I am determined to insist on this point in daily life and make full use of the positive effect achieved by persistence.

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